Here are my comments to you: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zUYEjN6xao4

Thanks,

Michael

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Dear Michale,
My name is Pim. I’ve felt really have no direction and low confident to take Toefl test. I took this test for several time but it never better than 75(Toefl ibt).Moreover, my reading score never better than 16.Could you please give me some advice how to become successful toefler? I really need score over 85 as soon as possible.
Yours respectfully,

Pim

Great. When you go to the writing and speaking lessons, you can begin posting written and audio responses to the questions, and I will be happy to grade them.

Thanks,

Michael, founder of the 7 Step System to Pass the TOEFL iBT

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hi Michael Buckhoff this is leonardo (Baseball player). I have bought the 7 steps , and also subscribed to speaking clearly. I saw your video, I going to follow you advice. I changed the date of my toefl by 15 apryl to have enough time to practice in your speaking course and also the 7 steps.

take care you!

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Both parents should have an equal responsibility in child rearing.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Here is my answer :

No doubt that parent’s responsibility to their children rearing are quite important. Although, an argumentative viewpoints raised regarding whether the man should have the responsibility to his child’s care or the women should so. In my opinion both should have an equal and completed caring tasks.

First of all, children require a complete rearing from both parents. In fact, children during their first years of life needs a lot of love that comes equally from the husband and his wife. Moreover, lacking one of his/her parent, child will live with a decreased love that effects his life in the future. I have an experience with one of my relatives, John, his parents divorced when he was young, around seven years, and this caused a severe impact to his personality.

In addition to the previous point, children rearing cannot done with one member than the other. Consequently, both of parents should have an equal attention to their children life, and having the sense to complete each other. actually, the man has a responsibility regarding how secure his children life. However, the women has a vast tasks in her child eating and overall health.

All of all, the children care is a difficult responsibility. Moreover, children need love equally from both parents, and both the man and the woman should complete each other. In fact, children care should be carried on by both parents.

I write it within 30 min . I’m dying to see your feedback.

Thank you so much ,
NABEEL

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sunitha